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hypothermic nightmare
Cold winter air
Locked in despair
Night quickly approaches
unseen horror slowly encroaches
Hypothermia sets in
fear creeps from within
Bodily functions frozen solid
Vision left completely blotted
White noise all around
no reprieve to the onslaught of sound
Distant screams of terror arise
Oblivion washes over my cries
Morning never seen again
Death takes its chilling win
Locked in despair
Night quickly approaches
unseen horror slowly encroaches
Hypothermia sets in
fear creeps from within
Bodily functions frozen solid
Vision left completely blotted
White noise all around
no reprieve to the onslaught of sound
Distant screams of terror arise
Oblivion washes over my cries
Morning never seen again
Death takes its chilling win
Published 10th Mar 2015
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10th Mar 2015 10:58am
This is a really cool poem! I want to show this to my friend Zack who has a fear of hypothermia just to tease him and maybe freak him out!!
21st Mar 2015 7:35am
28th Mar 2015 3:30am
Heeheehee yes I did, he just gave me a weird look and rolled his eyes. I teased him some afterwards!!
