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Short Lived
Seasoned lover
Sentimental betrayer
She goes out, but stays in
The needle is another means of transportation.
She broke hearts cause hers couldn't be fixed
Time of death was 08:36.
Her life was short lived,
so was mine.
My name was Bailey,
And I was going to be her baby.
Sentimental betrayer
She goes out, but stays in
The needle is another means of transportation.
She broke hearts cause hers couldn't be fixed
Time of death was 08:36.
Her life was short lived,
so was mine.
My name was Bailey,
And I was going to be her baby.
Published 9th Mar 2015
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9th Mar 2015 12:30pm
I really like this...the way it flows, the strength held within these words and your second message...very good... :)
but do hope it's not been written from a real event but then again if it is then its touching 'that' that's within us...& doing so can make the difference from something written from the heart as opposed to something from the soul...
but do hope it's not been written from a real event but then again if it is then its touching 'that' that's within us...& doing so can make the difference from something written from the heart as opposed to something from the soul...
9th Mar 2015 11:45pm
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