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Happy pills
When your heart breaks down
And there’s no one around;
Don’t frown.
When you’re alone and asking why
Watching the day pass you by;
Don’t cry.
When everything seems unfair
And you think we don’t care;
Don’t despair.
When the clouds start to clear
And the pill bottle is near;
Come back to me dear.
Or follow the light
The one that is bright
See the beautiful sight
The sunshine is embracing
You got it your way
I’ll follow you there one day.
And there’s no one around;
Don’t frown.
When you’re alone and asking why
Watching the day pass you by;
Don’t cry.
When everything seems unfair
And you think we don’t care;
Don’t despair.
When the clouds start to clear
And the pill bottle is near;
Come back to me dear.
Or follow the light
The one that is bright
See the beautiful sight
The sunshine is embracing
You got it your way
I’ll follow you there one day.
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Re: Happy pills
8th Mar 2015 5:51pm
Good lines!! I know what's that like and I have to take pills for my depression, it really helps a lot.
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re: Re: Happy pills
8th Mar 2015 6:31pm
I'm sorry to hear that your in this position (pills) I'm no prescribed at the moment, mainly because I don't reach out but I hope that your situation impoves in he near future.
Again thanks for the feedback, I'm always open for honest criticism, so if u have any opinions on my work, please feel free to leave a note on them :D
Deathnotewhovian
Again thanks for the feedback, I'm always open for honest criticism, so if u have any opinions on my work, please feel free to leave a note on them :D
Deathnotewhovian
re: re: Re: Happy pills
8th Mar 2015 8:14pm
Thanks, I am getting a lot better! I currently don't have any criticism on this poem but, if I find anything on your other poems I will tell it to you.
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8th Mar 2015 8:17pm
re: Re: Happy pills
Thanks, I'm glad to hear it, this poem is one that I feel like I tried to hard on so I kinda fear it to be honest... But I'm glad to hear posetive feedback
Re: Happy pills
Anonymous
8th Mar 2015 7:58pm
Welcome to DU. thanks for sharing
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re: Re: Happy pills
8th Mar 2015 8:17pm
Thanks Slowgasm, I also like the way u write maybe I could use ur style as inspiration one day :D
Re: Happy pills
9th Mar 2015 00:18am
Oh I like this a lot, I was depressed a long time ago ( when I was 8 to be exact) I never took any pills but I had to fight through a lot of pain because no one could tell I was sad.
This is a emotional piece.
This is a emotional piece.
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re: Re: Happy pills
9th Mar 2015 00:41am
He he thank you
I'm sorry to hear that u went through that, though I hope your better? :D
This is actually one of my poems that isn't personal to me - though I'm on the verge of depression (so I'm withdrawn) I don't have suicidal thoughts. This was just made during a dark mood :/
I'm not reaching out to people either so I know that feeling...
I'm glad u enjoyed it :D
I'm sorry to hear that u went through that, though I hope your better? :D
This is actually one of my poems that isn't personal to me - though I'm on the verge of depression (so I'm withdrawn) I don't have suicidal thoughts. This was just made during a dark mood :/
I'm not reaching out to people either so I know that feeling...
I'm glad u enjoyed it :D
Re: Happy pills
Anonymous
9th Mar 2015 1:49am
Loved it welcome to DUP ☺
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re: Re: Happy pills
9th Mar 2015 7:43am