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Halls of the Tormented
In the halls of the tormented,
screams abound never ended
Children of the damned
Forever Tortured, Unyielded and Unrepentant,
Tormented eyes burned away in those that forever wish to go home and enter into the halls of the living
Children of the damned
forever chained
heretics, lunatics, warped minds and false believers who played with madness
All who perish away in vanity
burning away into endless nights of eternity
screams abound never ended
Children of the damned
Forever Tortured, Unyielded and Unrepentant,
Tormented eyes burned away in those that forever wish to go home and enter into the halls of the living
Children of the damned
forever chained
heretics, lunatics, warped minds and false believers who played with madness
All who perish away in vanity
burning away into endless nights of eternity
Published 1st Mar 2015
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1st Mar 2015 6:43am
I really dig this, brother. Well done. My only gripe is that it's too short. It has all the workings of a killer song
2nd Apr 2015 5:56pm
Hades, my friend, sorry for such the late reply man, I space out too much hehehe... Yeah, I hear ya, when was done and looked at it, I thought it was too short also, and wanted to keep adding to it, but every that I did, it messed it up and veered off track into something else and lost the flow... but is cool, there are many halls to write about, the Tormented is but just one hall out there to tell about hehehe... hows things man: wolf / Eddie
4th Apr 2015 4:47am
I shouldn't complain too much. Sometimes when I try to do more sometimes I screw it up. Leave like it is in all it's awesomeness.
Things are going ok, working and tired as a Mofo. But ok. You?
Things are going ok, working and tired as a Mofo. But ok. You?
