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Just so you know...
The weight of your gaze hangs like Jupiter's gravity above each word that slips so perfectly from your lips. Those lips that fill the room with my desire, each bend and curve exacerbating the tension in my mind with longing to feel your smile radiating across the table and into my eyes.
As our thoughts step over each other with the grace of tango dancers or the clumsiness of two children drawn to each other in adoration of the pure compatibility of our minds, you tell me about your day and I just hear you say how beautiful the world is now that you are in it with me.
The sun is shining in my mind and I want to run through meadows picking flowers to touch their petals delicately with silver kisses and September sunrises, pushing into satin and silk and flutters of butterflies dancing through the center of my soul.
Just so you know...
As our thoughts step over each other with the grace of tango dancers or the clumsiness of two children drawn to each other in adoration of the pure compatibility of our minds, you tell me about your day and I just hear you say how beautiful the world is now that you are in it with me.
The sun is shining in my mind and I want to run through meadows picking flowers to touch their petals delicately with silver kisses and September sunrises, pushing into satin and silk and flutters of butterflies dancing through the center of my soul.
Just so you know...
Published 28th Feb 2015
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28th Feb 2015 3:21am
"The grace of tango dancers or the clumsiness of two children." This is shamelessly romantic and genuinely charming. You ask her about her day and hear a rhapsody in reply even if she's complaining about the traffic. The world goes right on by.
28th Feb 2015 4:05am
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28th Feb 2015 4:34am
oh gosh! this makes me all butterfly-y and fuzzy. so good in all the best ways possible. she's a lucky one.
28th Feb 2015 3:05pm
" Those lips that fill the room with my desire, each bend and curve exacerbating the tension in my mind with longing to feel your smile radiating across the table and into my eyes." Omg I love this! So beautifully written.
1st Mar 2015 1:01am
1st Mar 2015 4:24pm
This was entirely lovely !
A clear depiction of an emerging love... perhaps.
A clear depiction of an emerging love... perhaps.
