My only true friend

To be honest...This makes meh cry. I know what your going through. I'm at a young age and I'm going through it too. The razor is the only one who understands. And you then can't stop after it started it's job.
Good job

ya but please i may not know you but im sure somebody cares... dont cut yourself it just leaves stupid little scars haha im planning to go all the way... suicide seems to be my only choice but dont cut urself i know people care for you and thank you so much... I hope you weren't heart broken i know exactly how it feels today was probably the worst day of my life my gf broke up with me than kissed other guys in front of me haha so this might be the last poem i write maybe the last words i post... dont do that shit too yourself

i wont pretend to understand what goes on here with you and the razor,but your poem is good, in fact you could probably switch the words"the razor" and place food,drugs or any other addiction there and it would loose nothing.
nice one!

Some good visual tendencies through_out... no need for all the periods n commas! The shortened format dictates (should) the tempo. Also it will allow for more power in places where u want/need punctuation! Still a good read. Keep grindin