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Commission

(....love through jaded eyes of dissappointment.  Will, can I ever get back to feeling like love is my friend ever again?)

“…...would you mind
if I touched and I kissed
and I held you tight
'till the morning light ?...”


Would it cause you displeasure
to lay beneath my body
uplifted by strong arms
moved by
strong pliable hips
and an equally strong back......

…..in submission to
this powerful position
between your golden thighs ?

….each recalcitrant thrust
lifting your pleasure higher,
closer to the skies
your soul taking a euphoric,
blissful flight
over and over again
slipping against this smooth
butter cream release,
mouth open
unable to scream......

…..in submission to this love we share

“Come away with me in the night
Come away with me
And I will write you a song....

…come away with me and we'll kiss
On a mountaintop
Come away with me
And I'll never stop loving you”

….and I press toward the mark
Raining blessings of spectacular dreams
showing you a love the world has never seen
fulfilling your every need......

“.....when my hips separate from the grind
and his hands can't grip my rhythm,
I need him to loose himself inside of me...”


Baby, I humbly submit my everything to you.......

“....and I want to wake up with the rain
falling on a tin roof
while I'm safe there in your arms
So all I ask is for you
to come away with me in the night
Come away with me......”
Written by MusicallyMrM (Mr_Mahogany_Wood)
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