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I wrote this, and then he left.

You took me on the first date i've ever been on.
I couldnt decide what was more eye catching
You or the stars
I chose you.

First breathless kiss.
And every kiss after that left me gasping for air.
I could happily suffocate if it meant kissing you forever.

You were the first to treat me like i meant something
You won me over with everything you said
In the beginning i was scared
But i let myself fall
For the first time

There is a first time for everything
With you, i had a million firsts and no lasts.
But the one first i wish i could have given you was me.
All of me.

But since i couldnt give you that,
ill just give you the first heart of love i've ever given
because i cant picture myself with anyone else
but you
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