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message In a bottle

im like a message in a bottle in the middle of the sea no particular destination im just floating to destiny...
not sure of who I am or what im destined to be only hoping to make it their successfully...
im trapped in this bottle I need to be free its only glass how hard could escaping it be but if I escape now I'll only sink so I keep floating until my detiny's reached....
and someone finds me and tries to read and understand the message that I bring....
but im like an incomplete sentence hard to recieve figuring me out will be awfully hard to achieve
if someone manages to succeed the message will be even harder to believe...
then they'll deel much regret and overwhelmed by me
then theyll put me back in my bottle and throw me back inthe sea
then I'll go back into oblivion until another destiny us reached...
the next person who finds me lets hope they'll see im a message un a bottle im where I should be
theres a reason tgat im here that im not free
so, viewers discretion is advised if you dare to take a peek inside...
Written by theparadox86
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