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Four brothers (one submissive)
i’ll rock your world girl
i’ll give it to you
yeah, I’ll give it to you
all the sick desires you want
i’ll give them to you
yeah girl, I’ll give them you...
(Traven – the calm one)
you are my submissive
now get down on your knees
lip’s opened wide with my dick inside
hands behind your back, bob up and down
looking into your eyes
I see how you’re drenched with doubt
and a mouth full of spunk
your eyes say it all
what happened to Miss Innocent
the one before I started to lick that clit
got you to the point of no return
now I share you with my three brothers
i’ll rock your world girl
i’ll give it to you
yeah, I’ll give it to you
all the sick desires you want
i’ll give them to you
yeah girl, I’ll give them you...
(Devin – the twisted)
the sweet smell of pussy drip
move aside brother, let me hit this bitch
kick her to the ground like she’s dirt
spread those legs, slut
lets start the ride
spit on you because your trash
screaming “no!, no!,” but you really mean yes
turn around for I can stretch out that ass
my brothers point and laugh as you try to crawl
now bend it down as I shoot for your hole
i’ll rock your world girl
i’ll give it to you
yeah, I’ll give it to you
all the sick desires you want
i’ll give them to you
yeah girl, I’ll give them you...
(Norman – the gentleman)
oh Devin, move aside
a girl like this must be appreciated
come off of the ground, baby
let me treat you right
fingering your flower as I lick your neck up and down
taking my tongue lower to your nipples, get them fully erect
kiss all the way to your hairless pussy
craving a drink because I’m so damn thirsty, for you
two hands gripping ass tightly as I pull my face in
having you gushing like a waterfall
I look up and smile as you stand so utterly drained
i’ll rock your world girl
i’ll give it to you
yeah, I’ll give it to you
all the sick desires you want
i’ll give them to you
yeah girl, I’ll give them you...
(Travis– the angry one)
bring that whore here
I want to fuck her up!
jump on baby, enjoy the fun
grind against me with those hips
you fucking slow down I’ll bruise that ass
throw you up against the wall
shoving all of me down your cock sucker
nasty drool engulfing my dick
running off onto your luscious tits
thanking god because you never looked so pretty
two hands on your head as I cum down your throat
you didn’t even choke
pick you up
give you a pat on the butt
way to go
you’re a big girl now
i’ll give it to you
yeah, I’ll give it to you
all the sick desires you want
i’ll give them to you
yeah girl, I’ll give them you...
(Traven – the calm one)
you are my submissive
now get down on your knees
lip’s opened wide with my dick inside
hands behind your back, bob up and down
looking into your eyes
I see how you’re drenched with doubt
and a mouth full of spunk
your eyes say it all
what happened to Miss Innocent
the one before I started to lick that clit
got you to the point of no return
now I share you with my three brothers
i’ll rock your world girl
i’ll give it to you
yeah, I’ll give it to you
all the sick desires you want
i’ll give them to you
yeah girl, I’ll give them you...
(Devin – the twisted)
the sweet smell of pussy drip
move aside brother, let me hit this bitch
kick her to the ground like she’s dirt
spread those legs, slut
lets start the ride
spit on you because your trash
screaming “no!, no!,” but you really mean yes
turn around for I can stretch out that ass
my brothers point and laugh as you try to crawl
now bend it down as I shoot for your hole
i’ll rock your world girl
i’ll give it to you
yeah, I’ll give it to you
all the sick desires you want
i’ll give them to you
yeah girl, I’ll give them you...
(Norman – the gentleman)
oh Devin, move aside
a girl like this must be appreciated
come off of the ground, baby
let me treat you right
fingering your flower as I lick your neck up and down
taking my tongue lower to your nipples, get them fully erect
kiss all the way to your hairless pussy
craving a drink because I’m so damn thirsty, for you
two hands gripping ass tightly as I pull my face in
having you gushing like a waterfall
I look up and smile as you stand so utterly drained
i’ll rock your world girl
i’ll give it to you
yeah, I’ll give it to you
all the sick desires you want
i’ll give them to you
yeah girl, I’ll give them you...
(Travis– the angry one)
bring that whore here
I want to fuck her up!
jump on baby, enjoy the fun
grind against me with those hips
you fucking slow down I’ll bruise that ass
throw you up against the wall
shoving all of me down your cock sucker
nasty drool engulfing my dick
running off onto your luscious tits
thanking god because you never looked so pretty
two hands on your head as I cum down your throat
you didn’t even choke
pick you up
give you a pat on the butt
way to go
you’re a big girl now
Published 6th Feb 2015
| Edited 7th Apr 2018
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6th Feb 2015 10:17am
6th Feb 2015 11:35am
I had so many thoughts when i was writing this, lol. I wanted a boy band feel, yet fun, yet dark, yet sexy and so on.
It was great fun though :-)
I like a good raw write from time to time
It was great fun though :-)
I like a good raw write from time to time
6th Feb 2015 11:57am
6th Feb 2015 11:59am
6th Feb 2015 3:26pm
Some girls like that rough training wanting more than one dick at a time. Keep putting this poetry on us DevilsChild.
6th Feb 2015 6:39pm
Anonymous
6th Feb 2015 3:31pm
Damn, DC.. kinda of an out there erotic.. but it was still delivered with skill.. great ink..
Dave
Dave
6th Feb 2015 6:40pm
yeah it is, lol!
I just like going with what my mind tells me. Even if i find it out there myself.
I just like going with what my mind tells me. Even if i find it out there myself.
6th Feb 2015 5:05pm
6th Feb 2015 6:41pm
6th Feb 2015 6:48pm
This is poem is like a trainwreck, I couldn't stop reading....It's a wicked little write. Hot and nasty.
6th Feb 2015 7:04pm
I like to think that others might view the relationship as fucked up, but it's like perfectly normal and fun to them :-)
Glad you enjoyed
Glad you enjoyed
6th Feb 2015 9:45pm
If one man had all of those personalities in one dirty mind, that would be one lucky bitch! :-)
Nice write DC.
Natalie
Nice write DC.
Natalie
6th Feb 2015 9:58pm
lol! that’s kind of funny because I was saying something the other day about how all those guys are just parts of my craziness. :-/
6th Feb 2015 10:20pm
Damn that was hot! Every girl likes to be a man's "trash" every now and then. Can't wait to read more.
6th Feb 2015 10:22pm
I like the twisted one myself, lol.
I'm sure one day i'll come up with some more dark erotic. Maybe not soon but some day.
Glad you enjoyed :-)
I'm sure one day i'll come up with some more dark erotic. Maybe not soon but some day.
Glad you enjoyed :-)
Damn! Steamy piece of ink, DC!
Your raw side is speaking I see (and like)
Getting you to the point of no return > this line speaks volumes!
Surprise, surprise, this is right up my alley ;-)
I get the feeling those four brothers resemble you, the four parts of you...
Very inspiring... did I say Damn? ;-)
Your raw side is speaking I see (and like)
Getting you to the point of no return > this line speaks volumes!
Surprise, surprise, this is right up my alley ;-)
I get the feeling those four brothers resemble you, the four parts of you...
Very inspiring... did I say Damn? ;-)
