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Synesthete's Love Poem in Blue
(written for uma's "Colours of Love" competition)
my love
pale blue rain music
colors my walls
of this house
we loved within
the many lives
we’ve shared
dripping
from blue heavens
blue tears
where I sit
by your grave
aching to kiss
your
blue
lips
my love
pale blue rain music
colors my walls
of this house
we loved within
the many lives
we’ve shared
dripping
from blue heavens
blue tears
where I sit
by your grave
aching to kiss
your
blue
lips
Published 5th Feb 2015
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5th Feb 2015 10:25pm
wow!!! so beautifully sad yet elegantly loving... well written in structure, laid out in such a way so that the reader reads it the way you intend.. a sure sign of a true poet.. thanks for sharing this
5th Feb 2015 10:33pm
Anonymous
5th Feb 2015 11:47pm
Brilliant write, Toni.. such wonderful imagery.. wonderful delivery.. truly incredible..
Dave
Dave
9th Feb 2015 6:30am
18th Dec 2015 10:30am
