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Surrounded ....
Surrounded... in a sensual embrace
clinging tightly to warm naked skin
being kissed with passion and hunger
desire sparks carnal fire deep within;
Intoxicated by the sweet smell of arousal
foreplay increases our urgency exponentially
without boundaries in our quest for rapture
repeated erotic gratification is a guarantee
Published 3rd Feb 2015
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3rd Feb 2015 6:20am
Picture fits it well. Would make a good tailpiece to a poetic story that ends in lovemaking.
3rd Feb 2015 5:19pm
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3rd Feb 2015 8:20pm
4th Feb 2015 6:13am
Thank you. I have put the poem up - I'll probably add the pic later when I have more time.
3rd Feb 2015 9:58am
"... without boundaries" - those two words alone speak of ultimate desire and trust ...
Nicely penned.
Nicely penned.
3rd Feb 2015 5:20pm
3rd Feb 2015 9:34pm
I agree. Boundaries are for wimps. True erotic gratification demands experimentation. Any volunteers?
3rd Feb 2015 10:27pm
5th Feb 2015 10:48am
After escalates unto foreplay. Lay around and make love all day. A glimpse to simmer, a brush to spark. It's in allllll those after and in between moments that the most amazing gratification is found in secret chambers.
Way relatable release, Deborahlee! Everyone should one day be able to resonate with this.
Way relatable release, Deborahlee! Everyone should one day be able to resonate with this.
