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Dreamt Surrender
never awaken me
from this illusion of
dreamt surrender
'tween raindrops we rose
made love to the sounds
of roused thunderstorms
electrified like butterfly wings struck
in the mist of twilight's snow
thirsting for dark honeysuckle wine's
impassioned clandestine nights
& early morn's enchantress
drenched in blushed musings
you whispered my name neath
unbridled torrent's hushed rushes,
as you licked dew from my breasts
caressed thigh's quiver
within sighs of enmeshed yielding
intoxicated metaphor's wicked rhymes
unfettered covet of smoky poetry
entwined in cravings' obsession
gasping impulsive breaths of
relentless abandon
from this illusion of
dreamt surrender
'tween raindrops we rose
made love to the sounds
of roused thunderstorms
electrified like butterfly wings struck
in the mist of twilight's snow
thirsting for dark honeysuckle wine's
impassioned clandestine nights
& early morn's enchantress
drenched in blushed musings
you whispered my name neath
unbridled torrent's hushed rushes,
as you licked dew from my breasts
caressed thigh's quiver
within sighs of enmeshed yielding
intoxicated metaphor's wicked rhymes
unfettered covet of smoky poetry
entwined in cravings' obsession
gasping impulsive breaths of
relentless abandon
Published 2nd Feb 2015
| Edited 3rd Feb 2015
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2nd Feb 2015 6:47pm
3rd Feb 2015 00:21am
3rd Feb 2015 00:14am
I noticed that, it's showing in 'my poems', not sure what the problem is...edit/modify doesn't seem to remedy the situation.
3rd Feb 2015 4:25am
3rd Feb 2015 2:23pm
3rd Feb 2015 3:02pm
Omg! This was deliciously espoused with
sharply crafted imagery n verbiage... Loved this! :)
sharply crafted imagery n verbiage... Loved this! :)
3rd Feb 2015 7:52pm
