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my addiction
it says take a pill for the pain
i take twelve
its supposed to relieve tension and strain
but i take them to get away from hell
this is the way i deal
with things so astray
taking them so i cant feel
anything the rest of the day
it makes me feel good
it makes me more like me
like im finally understood
im finally free
free to my addiction
i take twelve
its supposed to relieve tension and strain
but i take them to get away from hell
this is the way i deal
with things so astray
taking them so i cant feel
anything the rest of the day
it makes me feel good
it makes me more like me
like im finally understood
im finally free
free to my addiction
Published 7th May 2011
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7th May 2011 12:27pm
As usual, a raw, terse and tight read. The central opposition between "free" and "addicted" is well stated.
7th May 2011 2:21pm
I just couldn't sleep because all those words were floating around in my head.
11th May 2011 12:40pm
i love this one(: i han half-way relate to it, but not totally. i live the sense it creates. keep it up hunnie<33
11th Jul 2011 6:17am
