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Condemned to Limbo
Winter approached
in finality's hour,
quelled amidst midnight's
imperfect enticement
of darkly noted
spirit's impression,
motioning a welcome
goodbye gesture,
putting to rest
a chilled salutation,
ghostly ambitions
come out to play
articulating a well
spoken seduction,
chasing a soft
lullaby's enchantment
peaceably sleeping,
unfurled
in destiny's wake
condemned to limbo
[graphic karol bak]
in finality's hour,
quelled amidst midnight's
imperfect enticement
of darkly noted
spirit's impression,
motioning a welcome
goodbye gesture,
putting to rest
a chilled salutation,
ghostly ambitions
come out to play
articulating a well
spoken seduction,
chasing a soft
lullaby's enchantment
peaceably sleeping,
unfurled
in destiny's wake
condemned to limbo
[graphic karol bak]
Published 27th Jan 2015
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28th Jan 2015 2:18pm
I find myself struggling for the right words to praise this. Its intellectually stimulating, as I have found your works to be. The limbo is an interesting realm, cultivating those mysterious images along with the helplessness of escaping it. I much like this! Thank you for sharing. Respectfully, blue angel
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2nd Feb 2015 4:27pm
3rd Feb 2015 3:45pm
Yup BA said it right, ur ink is intellectually stimulating
n for me nothing's better than something that stimulates
the mind :)
n for me nothing's better than something that stimulates
the mind :)
3rd Feb 2015 4:04pm
