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You've taken me over
You've taken me over
driven me to distraction,
as my mind wonders
I contemplate your taste;
With an sense of urgency
my carnal desire for you grows,
I need to feel you deep inside
my legs straddling your waist.
What comes into your mind
as your thinking about me,
when you close your eyes at night
and you find me pictured there;
Do you imagine my glistening skin
sliding sensually against yours
and have you vividly fantasized
about the euphoria we could share?
You've taken me over
I can't get you out of my mind,
wondering about the way you taste
and how amazing that you'd feel;
I think of you too often now
it's nearly become an obsession
hanging on tightly to the figment
since this just can not be real
driven me to distraction,
as my mind wonders
I contemplate your taste;
With an sense of urgency
my carnal desire for you grows,
I need to feel you deep inside
my legs straddling your waist.
What comes into your mind
as your thinking about me,
when you close your eyes at night
and you find me pictured there;
Do you imagine my glistening skin
sliding sensually against yours
and have you vividly fantasized
about the euphoria we could share?
You've taken me over
I can't get you out of my mind,
wondering about the way you taste
and how amazing that you'd feel;
I think of you too often now
it's nearly become an obsession
hanging on tightly to the figment
since this just can not be real
Published 27th Jan 2015
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27th Jan 2015 8:03am
27th Jan 2015 8:25am
27th Jan 2015 5:24pm
This is fine work, Deborah. I really like the ambiguity of the last two lines: "hanging on tightly to the figment / since this just can not be real." Is the lover real or imagined? This is otherwise both vivid and euphoric, two qualities you mentioned. It's a sweet dream and maybe something more.
27th Jan 2015 6:05pm
Anonymous
27th Jan 2015 10:21pm
Deborahlee3313,
Sexy visuals!
Loved your line:
"I need to feel you deep inside
my legs straddling your waist."
tornado
Sexy visuals!
Loved your line:
"I need to feel you deep inside
my legs straddling your waist."
tornado
27th Jan 2015 10:52pm
28th Jan 2015 12:28pm
just love this...double on the sigh because i live it. excellent write!
28th Jan 2015 5:20pm
