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Lines
One thin line crosses the pale surface
crooked
shallow
unsure
One red line too difficult to form
Two thin lines lay on the pale surface
one crooked
one curved
both questionable
Two red lines too soft to feel
Three thins litter the pale surface
one crooked
one curved
one jagged
Three red lines too light to see
Four thin lines drawn on the pale surface
three uneven
three unsure
one straight
Four red lines to feel again
crooked
shallow
unsure
One red line too difficult to form
Two thin lines lay on the pale surface
one crooked
one curved
both questionable
Two red lines too soft to feel
Three thins litter the pale surface
one crooked
one curved
one jagged
Three red lines too light to see
Four thin lines drawn on the pale surface
three uneven
three unsure
one straight
Four red lines to feel again
Published 23rd Jan 2015
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23rd Jan 2015 5:36pm
I take this as an effort to find balance between doubt and certainty. There's confusion between different impulses ("Am I doing the right thing?") and informed decision making, which comes when doubt is finally eliminated or at least minimized. The lines are shaky individually, but combined reveal the complete picture. Then one can get it straight. Fine job, Miranda.
26th Jan 2015 1:51pm
