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Lovely
[This is my entry for: Mystery Competition 2. I am to define love.]
Love is sin in a heavenly place.
Love is steaming hot scream in the face.
Love is a magical wonderland of wishful thinking.
Love is a stare without ever blinking.
When I touch love, my feet want to dance.
If I ever trip, consider it happenstance.
The heart is like a river in a hearty flood;
overflowing with madness and love.
There is no place to go to escape love's splendor,
though I consider the fall an adventure.
Love is sin in a heavenly place.
Love is steaming hot scream in the face.
Love is a magical wonderland of wishful thinking.
Love is a stare without ever blinking.
When I touch love, my feet want to dance.
If I ever trip, consider it happenstance.
The heart is like a river in a hearty flood;
overflowing with madness and love.
There is no place to go to escape love's splendor,
though I consider the fall an adventure.
Published 11th Jan 2015
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11th Jan 2015 7:33am
12th Jan 2015 10:04am
11th Jan 2015 8:14pm
This is very beautiful!!! The way you were able to convey the different emotions that are involved when falling in love... you portray the feelings with accuracy infused with imagery. from "wishful thinking" to "splendor" to "falling".... when you write like this I feel its depth profoundly. Great stuff!!!
12th Jan 2015 10:04am
13th Jan 2015 12:12pm
Never was there ever a more genius short and sweet definition of love. Beautiful piece, Crim:)
8th Feb 2015 8:31am
