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Climax
When it's you and me I feel like we have eternity, all the time in the world to get lost in each other.
I'm curious to know what makes you flinch, squint and squirm
I want to take advantage of that and make you beg me for more.
I desire to make you always feel me, hear me...when you see a water fountain think of me.
I haven't been touched in a while so caution, wet.
Every story has a climax and you almost there.
I'm curious to know what makes you flinch, squint and squirm
I want to take advantage of that and make you beg me for more.
I desire to make you always feel me, hear me...when you see a water fountain think of me.
I haven't been touched in a while so caution, wet.
Every story has a climax and you almost there.
Published 5th Jan 2015
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5th Jan 2016 6:53pm
"when you see a water fountain think of me.
I haven't been touched in a while so caution, wet.
Every story has a climax and you almost there."
That to me is a near perfect poem. Personally I could take or leave the rest of it
I haven't been touched in a while so caution, wet.
Every story has a climax and you almost there."
That to me is a near perfect poem. Personally I could take or leave the rest of it
