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A Shadow of Love
"Standing in the pouring rain loading my nine
Watching my girl and some fool kissing while they wine and dine ,
"To me their dead without a shadow of a doubt
Because I'm taking both of them deceiving motherfuckers out,
"I stroll across the street, black coat flapping in the wind
The Grim Reaper already over there hovering, because he know it's their end,
"Hi bitch. By bitch. As my nine is aimed at her eye
Terror shows across her face as skull and brain begins to fly,
"I don't give a fuck if it's a public place
Because I'm not standing for betrayal or this damn disgrace,
"The motherfucker is scared, because in my eyes all he see is hate
The nine mili-meter goes off again, sending him to his fate,
"That bitch was my everything, and she knew I loved her
But that shit ended when she start fucking my brother,
"Now they both have their lover's suite in cheaters hell
As the police is dragging my ass off to jail".
Watching my girl and some fool kissing while they wine and dine ,
"To me their dead without a shadow of a doubt
Because I'm taking both of them deceiving motherfuckers out,
"I stroll across the street, black coat flapping in the wind
The Grim Reaper already over there hovering, because he know it's their end,
"Hi bitch. By bitch. As my nine is aimed at her eye
Terror shows across her face as skull and brain begins to fly,
"I don't give a fuck if it's a public place
Because I'm not standing for betrayal or this damn disgrace,
"The motherfucker is scared, because in my eyes all he see is hate
The nine mili-meter goes off again, sending him to his fate,
"That bitch was my everything, and she knew I loved her
But that shit ended when she start fucking my brother,
"Now they both have their lover's suite in cheaters hell
As the police is dragging my ass off to jail".
Written by
CasketSharpe
Published 24th Dec 2014
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Re: A Shadow of Love
24th Dec 2014 5:37pm
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24th Dec 2014 5:40pm
Thank you for the time to read and comment. The betrayal of family is sometimes the hardest one to overcome.
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24th Dec 2014 6:42pm
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24th Dec 2014 9:48pm
Re: A Shadow of Love
24th Dec 2014 6:50pm
This was bad-as-
shit CasketSharpe.
I'll admit, while reading
it from the start, I thought
it was gonna play out like
your typical betrayal/tragedy/
revenge story, and, it did but
I didn't expect the twist in it.
That shits true though.
I don't have any biological
brothers but do/did, have friends
who were like brothers pull this
same shit.
Excellent write... Pan
shit CasketSharpe.
I'll admit, while reading
it from the start, I thought
it was gonna play out like
your typical betrayal/tragedy/
revenge story, and, it did but
I didn't expect the twist in it.
That shits true though.
I don't have any biological
brothers but do/did, have friends
who were like brothers pull this
same shit.
Excellent write... Pan
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re: Re: A Shadow of Love
24th Dec 2014 9:51pm
Haters and betrayers comes from people you know and don't know. Always have to keep eyes in the back of your head.
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Anonymous
25th Dec 2014 1:03am
Excellent portray of deceit.
Enjoyed the rawness of the ink. Bloody enjoyable!
Enjoyed the rawness of the ink. Bloody enjoyable!
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25th Dec 2014 5:15pm
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2014 00:43am
Wow I was not expecting the man to the brother
Which made this piece amazing
Which made this piece amazing
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