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It...few letters and yet packing so much
It moves when I think about the sexiness you command
your colorful lingerie and all
couldn't hide it if I dared tried
with my soldier standing tall
It throbs when I think of you in that "fuck me" red
like a beacon that alerts a man
in my mind at least the message is just for me
intercourse is the essence of heated plans
It surges when I see those inviting thighs
you angled seductively on the bed
appetite ready for both take off and landing
when completed you will be well fed
It pulsates when I think of you pulling panties down
access better for the passionate dive
is there anything else that provides such pleasure
or suggests what it means to be alive?
It motions for more attention when I think of you with another guy
my thoughts wanting to erase him from your mind
and the coos that echo from your mouth
when I am taking you from behind
So you could say it is one dimensional
the path of it's choosing summoned up in one phrase
duration so preferred suggests repeat trips
taking both of us to a sexual daze
your colorful lingerie and all
couldn't hide it if I dared tried
with my soldier standing tall
It throbs when I think of you in that "fuck me" red
like a beacon that alerts a man
in my mind at least the message is just for me
intercourse is the essence of heated plans
It surges when I see those inviting thighs
you angled seductively on the bed
appetite ready for both take off and landing
when completed you will be well fed
It pulsates when I think of you pulling panties down
access better for the passionate dive
is there anything else that provides such pleasure
or suggests what it means to be alive?
It motions for more attention when I think of you with another guy
my thoughts wanting to erase him from your mind
and the coos that echo from your mouth
when I am taking you from behind
So you could say it is one dimensional
the path of it's choosing summoned up in one phrase
duration so preferred suggests repeat trips
taking both of us to a sexual daze
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Re: It...few letters and yet packing so much
22nd Dec 2014 11:05am
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22nd Dec 2014 1:54pm
Re: It...few letters and yet packing so much
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22nd Dec 2014 3:25pm
Re: It...few letters and yet packing so much
22nd Dec 2014 3:26pm
Nice opening lines which grab the attention of the reader to keep on reading...nice flow and imagery. Very good read...
EngrVV
EngrVV
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re: Re: It...few letters and yet packing so much
22nd Dec 2014 3:35pm
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22nd Dec 2014 3:47pm
I hope so too...likewise. Just got busy with so many social functions in the DC area and the long drive down south during the holiday vacation.
Have a safe and joyous holiday season my friend!
EngrVV
Have a safe and joyous holiday season my friend!
EngrVV
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Re: It...few letters and yet packing so much
22nd Dec 2014 6:12pm
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22nd Dec 2014 6:34pm
Re: It...few letters and yet packing so much
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2014 2:11am
JAZZMANOR,
One dimensional, but with so many layers! Keep it up :-)
tornado
One dimensional, but with so many layers! Keep it up :-)
tornado
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re: Re: It...few letters and yet packing so much
23rd Dec 2014 2:21am
To quote Paul Simon, "One trick pony, one trick was all that horse could do..."
Thanks for the read
Thanks for the read
Re: It...few letters and yet packing so much
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2014 3:53pm
well. that certainly woke me up.
good images here. i like it! :)
good images here. i like it! :)
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re: Re: It...few letters and yet packing so much
23rd Dec 2014 5:13pm
Well if your normal method of waking up is coffee at Starbucks, I am pleased!
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