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~Down The Spiral~
Never
A
Choice
But
A
Diseased
Cycle
Surrendering
To
Darkest
Night
Trace
The
Memory
With
The
Tip Of
My
Knife
Pretending
Desperately
An Ideal
Picture
Unraveling
Beneath
An
Imitation
Despite
Knowing
We All Die Alone
-M
A
Choice
But
A
Diseased
Cycle
Surrendering
To
Darkest
Night
Trace
The
Memory
With
The
Tip Of
My
Knife
Pretending
Desperately
An Ideal
Picture
Unraveling
Beneath
An
Imitation
Despite
Knowing
We All Die Alone
-M
Published 21st Dec 2014
| Edited 23rd Dec 2014
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21st Dec 2014 4:54am
M a dark honest write on that downward spiral.. one I can relate to.. with love and respect Crim
Anonymous
21st Dec 2014 10:18am
Dark and beautiful..read like the decent of a ladder! Fantastic ink!
21st Dec 2014 8:54pm
Wow. What a style you have. Minimal words that pack a haunting punch. Thanks, ManiacalMark, for sharing this.
21st Dec 2014 8:55pm
P.S. "Despite Knowing We All Die Alone"--yes. And gorgeous visual art accompanying it.
22nd Dec 2014 00:25am
23rd Dec 2014 7:09am
Are the words ascending or descending ... I love that scaffold can be interpreted either way ... Gorgeously dark image.
24th Dec 2014 5:05pm
This is beautiful. Love the way you spiraled down into a truth that we often fool ourselves not to believe. Thanks for sharing this!
25th Dec 2014 10:47am
