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Decide
change your hair style, you'd look better with make up, you're too loud
everything that makes you well you, someone always wants to change
don't look so angry all the time, socialize for once in your life
not knowing that you tried but society is already corrupted and programed to despise you
maybe if you dressed like this, you would be pretty if you just tried this
lowering my self esteem as if I needed more of that
no one is ever gonna want you if you're not this type of way
why tell me to accept who I am if you're going to continue to break me more than I break myself
you're worthless, you cant do anything right, you're so stupid
listening to stupidity from others instead of listening to yourself
we need to stop seeing ourselves through the worlds eyes and start seeing ourselves for who we truly are
we can either decide to let them rule us or let ourselves rule us.
everything that makes you well you, someone always wants to change
don't look so angry all the time, socialize for once in your life
not knowing that you tried but society is already corrupted and programed to despise you
maybe if you dressed like this, you would be pretty if you just tried this
lowering my self esteem as if I needed more of that
no one is ever gonna want you if you're not this type of way
why tell me to accept who I am if you're going to continue to break me more than I break myself
you're worthless, you cant do anything right, you're so stupid
listening to stupidity from others instead of listening to yourself
we need to stop seeing ourselves through the worlds eyes and start seeing ourselves for who we truly are
we can either decide to let them rule us or let ourselves rule us.
Published 20th Dec 2014
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20th Dec 2014 4:52am
I like how you address common problems the only thing I'd say about it is maybe format it a little differently to really give the effect of the opposite statements
20th Dec 2014 5:02am
thank you for the feed back :) but like my art work I let the person reading or looking at it hit them the way it wants to hit them though it came from my eyes people may read it in a totally different way.
