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Name your price
What would it take, to throw open desires doors?
To cast aside our prudent ritual
Shrug this skein of comfortable knowing
And let our carnal monsters out
What would it take, to repair the price of your gift?
To heal tissue stretched
In your sacrifice for those you treasure
And enjoy as if we had first met
What would it take, to awaken your lust?
To rush me in impassioned state
Dash me on your rain-swept shores
Solicit your name, gasped in ecstatic space
What would it take, to leave you tingling at my touch?
To play a stranger to your body
Bind your senses in soft silk
Explore you with stimulus, until your scream ‘enough!’
What does it take, to break down your walls?
To taste again your happiness
Feel your satisfaction gush
Merged yet apart, substance and spirit
To cast aside our prudent ritual
Shrug this skein of comfortable knowing
And let our carnal monsters out
What would it take, to repair the price of your gift?
To heal tissue stretched
In your sacrifice for those you treasure
And enjoy as if we had first met
What would it take, to awaken your lust?
To rush me in impassioned state
Dash me on your rain-swept shores
Solicit your name, gasped in ecstatic space
What would it take, to leave you tingling at my touch?
To play a stranger to your body
Bind your senses in soft silk
Explore you with stimulus, until your scream ‘enough!’
What does it take, to break down your walls?
To taste again your happiness
Feel your satisfaction gush
Merged yet apart, substance and spirit
Published 13th Dec 2014
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13th Dec 2014 12:14pm
Good piece of longing and questioning
Liking your style, reminds me of, well me ...
Liking your style, reminds me of, well me ...
13th Dec 2014 2:20pm
Thank you Poet - perhaps our circumstances share similarities - hence the alignment of mood and tone?
As you say - there is much I identify in your excellent works as well...
Perhaps we need to share a whisky sometime?
Now to tackle the question of miles between us...
As you say - there is much I identify in your excellent works as well...
Perhaps we need to share a whisky sometime?
Now to tackle the question of miles between us...
13th Dec 2014 3:04pm
Knappoque Castle 12 single malt Irish whiskey
Redbreast 12 - Pure pot still Irish whiskey
Those are my favs
Redbreast 12 - Pure pot still Irish whiskey
Those are my favs
13th Dec 2014 8:56pm
I must admit a lack of experience when it comes to Irish single malts. I tend to dwell in Scotland when it comes to coating one's tongue in times' labour.
Ardbeg Uigeadail, or Ardbeg Corry Vreckan are my fave single malt whisky's.
Peaty, smokey and unforgiving.
Sounds like a merging of new experiences is in order Poet!
Ardbeg Uigeadail, or Ardbeg Corry Vreckan are my fave single malt whisky's.
Peaty, smokey and unforgiving.
Sounds like a merging of new experiences is in order Poet!
13th Dec 2014 11:05pm
Not sure the Irish is smooth and not oakey, Petey and is pretty easy on the tongue. Kind of a melt away into UK paradise if indeed that exists ???
Compromise maybe in some clear spirits, vodja, gin or tequila ?
Compromise maybe in some clear spirits, vodja, gin or tequila ?
Anonymous
27th Dec 2014 7:15pm
a price i could name
or a price you could receive
barely touching skin
or a price you could receive
barely touching skin
27th Dec 2014 9:36pm
Anonymous
27th Dec 2014 10:03pm
better is the tease
than the actual action
hint of seduction
than the actual action
hint of seduction
