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Not So Brillo
Ammunition,
Ornate glass,
Shot gun shells.
Just smoke.
Mouth to mouth.
Resuscitation.
Smoothe lips,
Butane,
Medicated Blistex.
Just resin.
Cashed my check.
Bankruptcy.
Wool sweater,
Blue steel,
Wash machines.
Just foil.
Tongue in cheek.
Pharmacy.
Narcan Man saved Grace,
Shot her on the sofa.
First responders rollin' out
Stretcher lady in a coma.
Ornate glass,
Shot gun shells.
Just smoke.
Mouth to mouth.
Resuscitation.
Smoothe lips,
Butane,
Medicated Blistex.
Just resin.
Cashed my check.
Bankruptcy.
Wool sweater,
Blue steel,
Wash machines.
Just foil.
Tongue in cheek.
Pharmacy.
Narcan Man saved Grace,
Shot her on the sofa.
First responders rollin' out
Stretcher lady in a coma.
Published 11th Dec 2014
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12th Dec 2014 4:01am
12th Dec 2014 5:33pm
12th Dec 2014 9:32pm
This is really powerful. I like how every point is short, like a punch, hitting home each and every line. Definitely felt.
5th Jan 2015 1:23am
I adore this poem, 'tis top notch! The third stanza was the highlight for me, I love how it is written.
