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SWEET ECSTASY
The ecstasy
exploded
within her.
She wanted to laugh,
to cry,
to scream out loud
At this perfect moment
of climax;
she was whole,
she was alive—
It no longer mattered
If her eyes were
open
or
closed.
Published 11th Dec 2014
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11th Dec 2014 6:35pm
That moment of ecstasy obliterates rational thought and perception, replacing it with pure passion and feeling. Just wish it could last forever. Fine job.
18th Dec 2014 00:28am
11th Dec 2014 8:18pm
It's one of the times one is truly and completely free...all that matters is the feeling. Good ink. Welcome.
18th Dec 2014 00:29am
11th Dec 2014 8:29pm
Lost in that dizzying moment, blending sensory and emotional stimuli - well captured in words.
Great work.
Great work.
18th Dec 2014 00:29am
