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why do yu love me
I'm just trying to be the best me I can be
When I fall down, it's just me and the ground
I am no king, I have no thrown
but yet you still love my
WHY?
When I fall down, it's just me and the ground
I am no king, I have no thrown
but yet you still love my
WHY?
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Re: why do yu love me
10th Dec 2014 6:13pm
I like this even though it's short and sweet I understand that your character isn't full of themselves and wonders why their lover thinks so highly of them.
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re: Re: why do yu love me
10th Dec 2014 6:14pm
Re: why do yu love me
10th Dec 2014 6:25pm
Do we need a reason to love?.. or is it just what we are supposed to do.. Regardless of weather we get love in return.. we must love.. Thinking of reasons why we find reasons not to love.. but theres realy no reason to hold back love.. as if its something you could ever run out of.. nice peice of thought to ponder n.. i think the real question is do we love ourselves enough to accept love from others? it is a good wquestion tho.. to ask weather their love for us is a selfish one or not..
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10th Dec 2014 6:34pm
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Re: why do yu love me
10th Dec 2014 7:18pm
my guess is becuse that person sees you as there whole world and even if you fall they still love you becuse to that person your there one and only that is my guess
beautiful poem :)
beautiful poem :)
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Re: why do yu love me
Anonymous
10th Dec 2014 8:03pm
Beautiful..because they love you for who u are no matter what..true love..hard to understand I know

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Re: why do yu love me
10th Dec 2014 9:00pm
There are many reasons to love someone may be he or she can explain you in more details...nice question
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Re: why do yu love me
11th Dec 2014 11:48am
for you loving someone just like that is a mystery that can't even be explained sometimes by the iniator of the emotions....
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Re: why do yu love me
16th Dec 2014 4:49pm
You gotta love the one your with no matter their faults. But in the same token don't be a damn fool either.
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26th Jan 2015 5:22pm
but what if they alot of them and cont control themselves do you still love them
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