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Upon A Star
Ever look
upon a star
just to wonder
who you are?
where to go
what to do
all these things
that question you
if your good
or if your bad
if your happy
or really sad
do not question
what you've done
let past be past
have some fun
now stop thinking
who you are
til the next you gaze
upon a star
upon a star
just to wonder
who you are?
where to go
what to do
all these things
that question you
if your good
or if your bad
if your happy
or really sad
do not question
what you've done
let past be past
have some fun
now stop thinking
who you are
til the next you gaze
upon a star
Published 27th Apr 2011
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Anonymous
28th May 2011 3:05am
The "your"s should be "you're" in the third verse, but other than that this is a sweet little ditty which flows like a stream and touches on big questions as lightly as a pixie on a toadstool. Thanks for the read.
31st May 2011 1:35pm
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