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Doors - Senryu
Doors re-opened wide
It's good to see you again
Swift from smile to kiss
It's good to see you again
Swift from smile to kiss
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published 25th Nov 2014
| Edited 29th Nov 2014
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- Edited 25th Nov 2014 8:41pm
25th Nov 2014 8:40pm
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25th Nov 2014 9:05pm
Touched by your wonderful and kind comment, Gabriel. Thank you so much! Happy about it! (-‿◦☀)
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25th Nov 2014 8:44pm
A very dramatic, dynamic read. Agree with Sansaint. I can sense the couple's eager embrace.
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25th Nov 2014 9:14pm
So glad that you agree with Gabriel, Solomon. To me this senryu is very special. If you can sense it, it's just right :-). Thank you!
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25th Nov 2014 9:31pm
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Yes, don't know for how long since nothing's really changed. But it is as it is ... Hope you're good, dear JeJe? You deserve it. xoxo
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25th Nov 2014 11:25pm
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26th Nov 2014 7:11am
Thank you so much, dear Paul. Glad, if this shines through. I'll enjoy it as long as it persists.
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Anonymous
26th Nov 2014 4:00am
Miss Chi,
....re-opened....again...I feel your warmth of familiarity.....spreading.
tornado
....re-opened....again...I feel your warmth of familiarity.....spreading.
tornado
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26th Nov 2014 7:18am
As we're often looking for familiarity because it reassures us, it only might be a trip into the remnant light of a paling sun. It is as it is and warm it is, too. Thanks, tornado, for your welcome thoughts.
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26th Nov 2014 7:01am
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26th Nov 2014 7:22am
Aw, I feel highly honored by your lovely words, candycrier! Thank you for saying this, it makes me utterly happy since it's my preferential form of poetry :-).
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26th Nov 2014 8:39am
so much joy expressed in your poem, Chi. hoping for an abundance of smiles & kisses...
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26th Nov 2014 12:10pm
Aw, so nice of you to wish me well, John! Thanks a lot for the read and your lovely comment!
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26th Nov 2014 9:27pm
I love those "shorties" :-) and am glad that you like this, too. Thanks a lot, Sadsmiles.
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27th Nov 2014 00:56am
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27th Nov 2014 7:26am
Aw, Hashman! That is such a wonderful expression! A 'word hug'. Shouldn't we all hug much more than we do, no matter with our arms or words? The world would be a much better place. Thank you so much for making my day. Word hugs to you, dear Hash!
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9th Dec 2014 9:04pm
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10th Dec 2014 7:47pm
Hasn't poetry always to do with creativity? Thought and word processes do not always guarantee a valuable outcome but with every piece I at least try my best :-). Thank you, Sara!
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30th Jul 2015 12:33pm
I love this... it made me smile. That's a wonderful gift to give with your beautiful words.
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