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25th Nov 2014 1:08pm
25th Nov 2014 4:22pm
Thanks for the read and comment ... bikes have such a psycho sexual connotation to them ... that sense of freedom - their roar and vibration. - all between the legs lol
... I'm headed to the bike show in town in a couple of weeks - shopping for new wheels ... and boots ...
... I'm headed to the bike show in town in a couple of weeks - shopping for new wheels ... and boots ...
25th Nov 2014 6:40pm
Yeah! You're bad ass biker boy! That's a fantastic biker senryu! Llllllllllllllllove it!
It was fun playing both sides of this one ... I've been considering getting one of my senryu as a tat ...
Your reading list add of this one just pushed it into contention ...
the other two:
when there was no ink
i harvested my marrow
just to write your name
if i were a man
i'd stay humbled at your feet
kissing your soul's wounds
Your reading list add of this one just pushed it into contention ...
the other two:
when there was no ink
i harvested my marrow
just to write your name
if i were a man
i'd stay humbled at your feet
kissing your soul's wounds
30th Nov 2014 2:39pm
So wonderful, both of them!!!! My favourite one is the first of them, that's really something! You're really a master of haiku (that IS my firm conviction :-))
30th Nov 2014 2:55pm
