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Weeping Under the Winter Tree
These blackened tears
Covered by the rain
Would show the sorrow
I have endured tonight
The bitterness and cold of the winter night
Reminds me of them all
How none cared at all
How they all ripped at my heart and my soul
I weep under the old tree
That I’ve spilt so much blood under
What is to come of me now?
Is this real? Or am I in hell?
Here I lay tonight
I await salvation for the pain, the suffering
That I have struggled through time and time again
There is no god… There is no hope
Owned by Dustin Smith: Bastardofbodom666
Covered by the rain
Would show the sorrow
I have endured tonight
The bitterness and cold of the winter night
Reminds me of them all
How none cared at all
How they all ripped at my heart and my soul
I weep under the old tree
That I’ve spilt so much blood under
What is to come of me now?
Is this real? Or am I in hell?
Here I lay tonight
I await salvation for the pain, the suffering
That I have struggled through time and time again
There is no god… There is no hope
Owned by Dustin Smith: Bastardofbodom666
Published 25th Apr 2011
| Edited 20th Mar 2012
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26th Apr 2011 1:14am
convince me that you actually feel those words and you're not just writing them in a piece of paper!
tame your feelings, make them yours, be one with them, hate them and love them and hate them again!
don't be afraid to feel overwhelmed by them!
tame your feelings, make them yours, be one with them, hate them and love them and hate them again!
don't be afraid to feel overwhelmed by them!
26th Apr 2011 1:17am
yea ik this one sux it was my attempt to break my writers block while listening to Springtime Depression and i guess it didnt work so well xD i plan to re-write this one... anyway read my other works and thx for the honesty :)
27th Apr 2011 5:41pm
my pleasure :) im glad you're not getting it in a bad way.
im sure you have talent :)
im sure you have talent :)
27th Apr 2011 8:05pm
i do... i think XD maybe not.. read the one i just posted i wrote it today
26th Apr 2011 4:31am
I actually like this. Its exactly how I'm feeling at this moment. I DO, however, believe that there's a God, I'm just learning one of His hard lessons tonight.
26th Apr 2011 8:01pm
me saying "there is no god" is kinda ironic XD considering im satanic hhahahahahahahaha
7th May 2011 1:09am
7th May 2011 1:10am
