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Shë
there she was glowing, dressed in red
my heart, body and soul yearned for her..
Our eyes locked and my knee buckled a little but I kept my composure.
I'll never let myself forget you and your soft fair skin, blue eyes that I wish I could dive in..
but I can't swim.
I remember the first time we touched, you were the first woman I ever loved and hated.
The day you left me won't ever stop replaying in my head at 3 a.m.
Glass shattered on the floor and I thought of you.
my heart, body and soul yearned for her..
Our eyes locked and my knee buckled a little but I kept my composure.
I'll never let myself forget you and your soft fair skin, blue eyes that I wish I could dive in..
but I can't swim.
I remember the first time we touched, you were the first woman I ever loved and hated.
The day you left me won't ever stop replaying in my head at 3 a.m.
Glass shattered on the floor and I thought of you.
Published 22nd Nov 2014
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22nd Nov 2014 3:50pm
Excellent.
"The day you left me won't ever stop replaying in my head at 3 am." That is true of me as well. I can close my mouth, keeping his organ out. But how can I get the thought of it out of my head. It's there, inside my mind, hour after hour, pumping,pumping,pumping! Oh the flow, the precious white flow, liquid love, sustaining me.
"The day you left me won't ever stop replaying in my head at 3 am." That is true of me as well. I can close my mouth, keeping his organ out. But how can I get the thought of it out of my head. It's there, inside my mind, hour after hour, pumping,pumping,pumping! Oh the flow, the precious white flow, liquid love, sustaining me.
23rd Nov 2014 3:52am
it sparkles seductively before it explodes, & makes the most exquisite brilliance...
