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Have anything to write, writer?
What happens when the writer can’t write?
What happens when the director has nothing to create?
All the people that had what made them who they are, suddenly run out of the joy.
They love what they do, but can’t find it anymore.
Lovers lose the love.
Parents lose their children.
Teachers teach the same thing again & again & lose the entertainment.
Some people think it’s a relief when they can’t do what they love to do.
The writer likes that he has run out of things to write about.
& that’s when people get lost.
Who is the writer if he can’t write anymore?
Where does all the passion go?
The director loves directing movies & now he tries to direct his life in a good path because he is lost.
Wandering around the face of the earth wondering where it all went wrong.
Where does the love go when there is no lover?
Does it fade away, why didn’t it grow?
How do the parents that lost their children bare the pain?
That is the bravest that there is.
The new teacher moved in, she’s fitting in.
But after a while;
she says “it feels likes exile..”
Not knowing where to go from here, not knowing what will come next.
We lay down & rest.
What happens when the director has nothing to create?
All the people that had what made them who they are, suddenly run out of the joy.
They love what they do, but can’t find it anymore.
Lovers lose the love.
Parents lose their children.
Teachers teach the same thing again & again & lose the entertainment.
Some people think it’s a relief when they can’t do what they love to do.
The writer likes that he has run out of things to write about.
& that’s when people get lost.
Who is the writer if he can’t write anymore?
Where does all the passion go?
The director loves directing movies & now he tries to direct his life in a good path because he is lost.
Wandering around the face of the earth wondering where it all went wrong.
Where does the love go when there is no lover?
Does it fade away, why didn’t it grow?
How do the parents that lost their children bare the pain?
That is the bravest that there is.
The new teacher moved in, she’s fitting in.
But after a while;
she says “it feels likes exile..”
Not knowing where to go from here, not knowing what will come next.
We lay down & rest.
Published 20th Nov 2014
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2014 10:36pm
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21st Nov 2014 00:31am
Writers get writer's block all the time. Creativity depends on inspiration and you never know when inspiration will hit you. Some poets write thousands of poems that vary in quality and make you wonder why they bothered. Some only write when they feel inspired and it seems like everything they write is great. In the end they have about the same number of good poems, just one has a lot of junk that never should have been written.
Parents become parents often without a choice. Most kids are not planned. There's no way to know who will be a good parent or be so bad that child protective has to step in and take their children away. Some parents run away from their responsibility and become dead beat parents, usually fathers. People are selfish and don't want to give up their lifestyles or heir money, so they try to pretend they don't even have kids. There are so many variables that there is no general answer.
School teachers have their good days and bad days just like everybody else. I was a teacher's aide and got to see it every day. You can have it all planned out, lesson plans ready and all of the info memorized, but stuff happens in class that throws you a curve. Sometimes you just have a lot on your mind.
Brains are not perfect. So many things can affect our thoughts. Sleep, drugs, hormones, distractions and general mental health to name a few. We do the best we can most of the time, but sometimes we need a break.
JJ
Parents become parents often without a choice. Most kids are not planned. There's no way to know who will be a good parent or be so bad that child protective has to step in and take their children away. Some parents run away from their responsibility and become dead beat parents, usually fathers. People are selfish and don't want to give up their lifestyles or heir money, so they try to pretend they don't even have kids. There are so many variables that there is no general answer.
School teachers have their good days and bad days just like everybody else. I was a teacher's aide and got to see it every day. You can have it all planned out, lesson plans ready and all of the info memorized, but stuff happens in class that throws you a curve. Sometimes you just have a lot on your mind.
Brains are not perfect. So many things can affect our thoughts. Sleep, drugs, hormones, distractions and general mental health to name a few. We do the best we can most of the time, but sometimes we need a break.
JJ
Anonymous
21st Nov 2014 1:09am
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2014 1:15am
Naathalie,
I disagree with the first two comments made.. They're taking this from a general point of view.. You're looking more abstract with this piece.. It's like someone of your age, and the point of view as you see it.. There is nothing wrong with this piece.. It's well written, and it's your view.. Remember that, some things are learned as you mature.. When i read this i seen it from your view, and how i felt at the age.. If you look at it as a person with kids, you're going to pick apart faults.. And you're right in the sense of people who hunger for something.. Something bigger than this world.. I'm just not into the negative vibe, i'm feeling here.. Life lessons, maybe, but i don't see a positive thing, in anything these first two comments have said.. Not about your writing, or your love for it.. Just ignore this negativity, your on the right path.. anything that rubs people the wrong way, means your hinting at something bigger.. I love this, i'm defending it.. It goes in my list excellent write..
Dave
I disagree with the first two comments made.. They're taking this from a general point of view.. You're looking more abstract with this piece.. It's like someone of your age, and the point of view as you see it.. There is nothing wrong with this piece.. It's well written, and it's your view.. Remember that, some things are learned as you mature.. When i read this i seen it from your view, and how i felt at the age.. If you look at it as a person with kids, you're going to pick apart faults.. And you're right in the sense of people who hunger for something.. Something bigger than this world.. I'm just not into the negative vibe, i'm feeling here.. Life lessons, maybe, but i don't see a positive thing, in anything these first two comments have said.. Not about your writing, or your love for it.. Just ignore this negativity, your on the right path.. anything that rubs people the wrong way, means your hinting at something bigger.. I love this, i'm defending it.. It goes in my list excellent write..
Dave
21st Nov 2014 1:32am
There was nothing negative in my comment. I was not saying anything negative about Nathalie's poetry, I was responding to what she wrote and offered my opinion on the concept of writers block. I was not saying that her poetry was junk and was not saying that about anyone in particular. I think it is very clear.
JJ
JJ
Anonymous
21st Nov 2014 8:55pm
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