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Her Heart
You could see it clearly
as she stood at the door;
where the light
in his fortunate eyes were ignited.
as she stood at the door;
where the light
in his fortunate eyes were ignited.
Published 20th Nov 2014
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2014 1:47am
Beautiful.. Thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
20th Nov 2014 4:21am
20th Nov 2014 8:08am
yes, very clear, as if her body were made of glass. such astounding images I'm seeing in your poem...
20th Nov 2014 8:35am
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