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Sugar
Syrup-sweet and
edible,
you pose, proposing
in languid prose
feats deserving poetry.
Supple-soft and
craveable,
milk and honey, love,
ungovernable
candy-urges surfacing.
Sticky-wet and
panting,
slantingly romancing,
horizontal dancing,
a melting sugar-tangle.
edible,
you pose, proposing
in languid prose
feats deserving poetry.
Supple-soft and
craveable,
milk and honey, love,
ungovernable
candy-urges surfacing.
Sticky-wet and
panting,
slantingly romancing,
horizontal dancing,
a melting sugar-tangle.
Published 6th Nov 2009
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6th Nov 2009 7:53pm
you have me smiling, normally i'm not to big on love poems but i dig your foreplay with words hehe great job!
Anonymous
7th Nov 2009 10:14am
indeed!
7th Nov 2009 4:16pm
9th Nov 2009 9:50pm
I could taste this on my lips, almost.
I loved this line -
[i]you pose, proposing
in languid prose [/i]
I enjoyed this. Short, simple and very sweet <3
I loved this line -
[i]you pose, proposing
in languid prose [/i]
I enjoyed this. Short, simple and very sweet <3
