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Absolution
Deserted desolation
Empty and null
No Sympathy, desire,
No shine,
no brilliance,
no sun,
dull.
No voices, no sign
of someone just as yourself.
Among a city
Strangely quiet,
Not even the one´s
that usually in your head.
Not a heart beat,
not a whisper,
not even a panic.
Absolute
solitude,
Only a memory of
yesterday´s Kronic.
Empty and null
No Sympathy, desire,
No shine,
no brilliance,
no sun,
dull.
No voices, no sign
of someone just as yourself.
Among a city
Strangely quiet,
Not even the one´s
that usually in your head.
Not a heart beat,
not a whisper,
not even a panic.
Absolute
solitude,
Only a memory of
yesterday´s Kronic.
Published 13th Nov 2014
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16th Nov 2014 7:08am
25th Nov 2014 6:18am
23rd Nov 2014 2:52pm
DAMN, Not even the one's that's usually in your head... Really like that line right there, that IS Complete Absolution my friend,
"No voices, no sign
of someone just as yourself" this is a great relatable line also my friend, all of it was terrific, take good care: wolf
"No voices, no sign
of someone just as yourself" this is a great relatable line also my friend, all of it was terrific, take good care: wolf
25th Nov 2014 6:19am
haha... thank Wolf!
means a lot coming from you... no prob man.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
means a lot coming from you... no prob man.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
