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Nature
Feel the ground
A gentle quake
Look at the sky
A little light
Play with the fire
An abundance of delight
The sights and sounds
Of nature
Teasing at your senses
Smell the breeze
A hint of leaves
Touch the lake
A simple glimmer
Hold the stars
A majority shimmer
The sights and sounds
Of nature
Luring you in
A gentle quake
Look at the sky
A little light
Play with the fire
An abundance of delight
The sights and sounds
Of nature
Teasing at your senses
Smell the breeze
A hint of leaves
Touch the lake
A simple glimmer
Hold the stars
A majority shimmer
The sights and sounds
Of nature
Luring you in
Published 11th Nov 2014
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2014 8:44pm
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11th Nov 2014 9:07pm
12th Nov 2014 3:14am
13th Nov 2014 5:20am
This is beautiful Rhiannon! Your work shows much maturity. This is a wonderful passage:
"Hold the stars
A majority shimmer"
"Hold the stars
A majority shimmer"
