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Slouching Back
The beast slouches back from Bethlehem
Somewhat ticked at the cool reception
It's concept of rebirth shrugged off
The streets running with confusion
A population engaged in trivialities
Slaves to the airwaves and social media
An excess of drum beating and waste
The prevailing ignorance a tragic joke
The beast's gaze, once pitiless, glazes over
Deciding these insects are on their own
Perfectly capable of destroying themselves.
Somewhat ticked at the cool reception
It's concept of rebirth shrugged off
The streets running with confusion
A population engaged in trivialities
Slaves to the airwaves and social media
An excess of drum beating and waste
The prevailing ignorance a tragic joke
The beast's gaze, once pitiless, glazes over
Deciding these insects are on their own
Perfectly capable of destroying themselves.
Published 10th Nov 2014
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11th Nov 2014 3:48pm
I really like the gist of the poem and the smirk at society and its icons; (Double that for thee Americana) wholly, it’s a solid.
11th Nov 2014 3:58pm
Thank you, Pishahee. Despite the tone of this I really do have some affection for society. I just get pissed off once in a while. But who am I to complain?
11th Nov 2014 4:32pm
That is so well said. I really know what you mean. :) We are a funny lot of people. We get our jabs in when we can. The more that I learned about societies, cultures, people, and how it all connects into the greater consciousness, the less I could be mad. Sociology is a fascinating subject. I see that you're in journalism. That must take on a greater responsibility to find truth beyond yourself. Have a great day. :)
Thanks again, Pishashee. I think the truth, despite anyone's best efforts, is almost always subjective. This can hopefully be minimized for the greater good. It's what we share that really counts.
19th Nov 2014 11:47am
Straight talk, the Beast doesn't fan the flames. Babylon's been burning since forever. Good vibe to your scope. Good write crowfly.
