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the course of true love...
we were in love on Ludgate Hill,
on Fleet Street and the Strand,
and even when at Charing Cross
we still walked hand in hand...
but when we got to Leicester Square,
well I'll be damned...
Published 9th Nov 2014
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9th Nov 2014 1:38am
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9th Nov 2014 4:57am
My heart ached for what might have been felt there. You just never know. Its a solid write though.
9th Nov 2014 11:28pm
9th Nov 2014 8:18pm
I'm still trying to finish (although you'll have a reason to leave it incomplete) the last sentence to see what might have happend there ...
at Leicester Square.
at Leicester Square.
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