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Baring My Soul
What we have found
Cannot be called average
Nor is it common place
Not for me anyway
Our strong connection
Is so very evident
In all the things we share
From lust to daily life
I have bared my soul
In so many ways
Allowed my vulnerabilities to shine
Stripped away all boundaries
Never shying away
When exposing my womanhood
Welcomed all of your advances
Arms open and legs parted
I do not want to reach a conclusion
Just bask in the endless after glow
Brought on by your masterful touch
Always so full of passion and emotion
Cannot be called average
Nor is it common place
Not for me anyway
Our strong connection
Is so very evident
In all the things we share
From lust to daily life
I have bared my soul
In so many ways
Allowed my vulnerabilities to shine
Stripped away all boundaries
Never shying away
When exposing my womanhood
Welcomed all of your advances
Arms open and legs parted
I do not want to reach a conclusion
Just bask in the endless after glow
Brought on by your masterful touch
Always so full of passion and emotion
Published 1st Nov 2014
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1st Nov 2014 11:29pm
2nd Nov 2014 1:56pm
1st Nov 2014 11:56pm
2nd Nov 2014 1:59pm
Sex is sex...but two people truly connect it puts things on a whole new level
Thank you for your thoughtful comment John
Glad u liked it hun
Thank you for your thoughtful comment John
Glad u liked it hun
2nd Nov 2014 00:30am
Yup... Romantic n very sensually gratifying
thoughts expressed here, u DO write this genre
exceptionally well! :)
thoughts expressed here, u DO write this genre
exceptionally well! :)
2nd Nov 2014 2:01pm
2nd Nov 2014 00:36am
It is a simple thing to be unclothed but to be naked emotionally, spiritual and intellectually is so much more difficult, profound and intimate.
2nd Nov 2014 2:05pm
So very true GW.
So much more difficult to strip away the barriers that we all put up
So much more difficult to strip away the barriers that we all put up
2nd Nov 2014 1:18am
Baring the inner most you is not an easy thing to do. Your willingness to do so says much. Enjoyed.
2nd Nov 2014 2:07pm
Allowing walls to stay up does nothing but keep u stuck n the same old lonely place.
Glad u enjoyed it darlin
Glad u enjoyed it darlin
2nd Nov 2014 2:37am
2nd Nov 2014 2:09pm
2nd Nov 2014 8:57am
2nd Nov 2014 2:10pm
22nd Nov 2014 5:20am
If I were to describe this poem, and all your poetry, with but a single word I would choose the word "passionate", Belle. You write with so much passion it practically sets me ablaze when I read it! Few poetesses and poets can channel love's fire like this. I've been able to in my more erotic poetry, and you channel it in pretty much all of yours, but that takes something very special to be able to do that! And that something is passion. :D
23rd Nov 2014 2:10am
Jessica i am so humbled by ur thoughts on my writes
I will admit tho i am a very passionate woman
I will admit tho i am a very passionate woman
