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Missing
She watches her
day and night
She hears her
night and day
When she talks to her
no answer comes out
When she tries to love her
nothing comes back
She knows somethings missing in her
but she won't admit it
When she tries what she tries
it kills her
strangles her lungs
leaves her body lifeless
But she still loves her
day and night
She hears her
night and day
When she talks to her
no answer comes out
When she tries to love her
nothing comes back
She knows somethings missing in her
but she won't admit it
When she tries what she tries
it kills her
strangles her lungs
leaves her body lifeless
But she still loves her
Published 21st Apr 2011
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22nd Apr 2011 3:34am
22nd Apr 2011 3:51am
idk the childs mother is doing hard core drugs and is always passed out or really high. so the child tries it to feel what her mother feels and it kills her
22nd Apr 2011 3:54am
but even though the drug kills her and her mother never loved her she still loves her mom
7th May 2011 2:11am
i love this. it reminds me of my mom as well.
i think, the ending.. it doesnt kill her literally, but figuratively. it kills her soul, her pride, her feelings. but she still loves her mother.
i think, the ending.. it doesnt kill her literally, but figuratively. it kills her soul, her pride, her feelings. but she still loves her mother.
8th May 2011 3:56am
