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She is Back
As I am apart from you
Im doing my work in school
She Writes to you
Now it feels like we are in a duel
Is she trying to take you from me
I guess you are surely missed
She better just let us be
Maybe she misses how you kissed
She thinks she loves you
She probably acts like a mutt
I guess she probably needs you
But guess what?
Your mine and im not letting you go without a fight
So i will keep your love and hold you tight...
Im doing my work in school
She Writes to you
Now it feels like we are in a duel
Is she trying to take you from me
I guess you are surely missed
She better just let us be
Maybe she misses how you kissed
She thinks she loves you
She probably acts like a mutt
I guess she probably needs you
But guess what?
Your mine and im not letting you go without a fight
So i will keep your love and hold you tight...
Published 4th Nov 2009
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6th Nov 2009 10:26pm
I really love this, because I think most girls would get pissed if their loved one was being taken away.
I love how you write<3
I love how you write<3
9th Nov 2009 3:50am
she is probably ugly and a stupid dog and she is nowhere near better than you
19th Nov 2009 3:07pm
This is beautiful; your emotions flow through so perfectly. I love the way you think. :)
20th Jun 2010 4:41pm
i love this. i feel like someone is tring to take my guy from me. even though she has never dated him and she has her own guy. i love how you wrote this. very good.
21st Jun 2010 4:27pm
thank you i hope no one is trying to take your guy away because he is yours and if he loves you so much he could tell you with complete honesty he only loves you
24th Aug 2010 3:31am
