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Poppies
orange poppies smile at the sun
you slowly walk the path of me
our private garden made
for just you and me
where our vines grow
and wrap upon each other's souls
as rain gently falls upon our petals
like kisses of lust making us grow
towards the sunset horizon
you slowly walk the path of me
our private garden made
for just you and me
where our vines grow
and wrap upon each other's souls
as rain gently falls upon our petals
like kisses of lust making us grow
towards the sunset horizon
Published 29th Oct 2014
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- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
30th Oct 2014 1:56am
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31st Oct 2014 11:15pm
30th Oct 2014 2:48am
para phrasing love
two pink mounds tops with pinkis aerola tips the sun burns his loins he traces upon her skin like a spider thin their private parts shiver hers opens his quivers then they exchange positions ere the on cumming incision the her vines like creepers intermingle and legs wrap like iron chains what else is left to creation her juices flow down her drain at attention his does remain till his fountain bursts in and stains flowers grow in time there is no need to quiver nor rhyme they two entwisted shine glimpse and smile all is over in that wee while they pile
two pink mounds tops with pinkis aerola tips the sun burns his loins he traces upon her skin like a spider thin their private parts shiver hers opens his quivers then they exchange positions ere the on cumming incision the her vines like creepers intermingle and legs wrap like iron chains what else is left to creation her juices flow down her drain at attention his does remain till his fountain bursts in and stains flowers grow in time there is no need to quiver nor rhyme they two entwisted shine glimpse and smile all is over in that wee while they pile
31st Oct 2014 11:16pm
Wow! What a great response......always happy when I inspire. Thank you for putting a smile upon my page. Luv it!! Xo :)
30th Oct 2014 1:05pm
31st Oct 2014 11:21pm
