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Broken in
No thoughts of happy unions, joyous sounds, romantic gestures,
waving them on as they pass, good luck, good luck, be brave,
laid out drifting, a soul drifter on my own double bed, making
star shapes into the nights sky, travelling onward, a voyager
into solar systems beyond my knowledge.
I fell at the feet of love, signs or signals to warning lights,
too wrapped up in my duvet to hear loves call, one minute I'm
alive with choice of direction, now stripped bare, my choices
made, tied behind my back, waiting breathlessly, waiting for my
masters release, teaching me the error of my singleton ways with
his firm touch, to be broken in is all I now wish for.
**A re-edit from this mornings hashed attempt at spelling
waving them on as they pass, good luck, good luck, be brave,
laid out drifting, a soul drifter on my own double bed, making
star shapes into the nights sky, travelling onward, a voyager
into solar systems beyond my knowledge.
I fell at the feet of love, signs or signals to warning lights,
too wrapped up in my duvet to hear loves call, one minute I'm
alive with choice of direction, now stripped bare, my choices
made, tied behind my back, waiting breathlessly, waiting for my
masters release, teaching me the error of my singleton ways with
his firm touch, to be broken in is all I now wish for.
**A re-edit from this mornings hashed attempt at spelling
Published 28th Oct 2014
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28th Oct 2014 1:44pm
28th Oct 2014 2:05pm
the first attempt wasn't
but this ones slightly more in tune with being able to spell a sentence out xD
but this ones slightly more in tune with being able to spell a sentence out xD
Anonymous
28th Oct 2014 5:36pm
Rose,
I agree, very powerful. Hopefully broken in but not in will ; )
Some pictures speak a thousand words....
tornado
I agree, very powerful. Hopefully broken in but not in will ; )
Some pictures speak a thousand words....
tornado
28th Oct 2014 5:49pm
28th Oct 2014 5:55pm
Seems like a nice start a journey into
pleasing your master... Great imagery :)
pleasing your master... Great imagery :)
28th Oct 2014 6:17pm
