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BJ...
Ooohhh damn...
It's so hard,
rock hard
Please it
ease it,
tease it
squeeze it
bite it
but not
too hard...
Lube it,
love it
rub it
adore it
explore it
suck it,
lick it
stick it
slow n' deeply
into that
pouty wet mouth
release it
repeat it
oh please
please it
Lube it,
love it
rub it
suck it,
release it
repeat it,
over n' over
n' over n' over
again...
until it crys
creamy white tears...
n' relinquishes
it's steely guard...
It's so hard,
rock hard
Please it
ease it,
tease it
squeeze it
bite it
but not
too hard...
Lube it,
love it
rub it
adore it
explore it
suck it,
lick it
stick it
slow n' deeply
into that
pouty wet mouth
release it
repeat it
oh please
please it
Lube it,
love it
rub it
suck it,
release it
repeat it,
over n' over
n' over n' over
again...
until it crys
creamy white tears...
n' relinquishes
it's steely guard...
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Re: BJ...
27th Oct 2014 5:17pm
Hmmmmmm....sounds like u have a yummy afternoon planned for somebody sir lol
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re: Re: BJ...
27th Oct 2014 5:34pm
Lmao... Nope I wish I did though!
n Dare I say likely, it's your ink that
helps to inspire my dreaming
about these scenarios! lol
Thank u lil southern one :)
n Dare I say likely, it's your ink that
helps to inspire my dreaming
about these scenarios! lol
Thank u lil southern one :)
Re: BJ...
27th Oct 2014 7:47pm
re: Re: BJ...
27th Oct 2014 10:04pm
Lmao well telling it for certain lol
Thank you for your continued support my sweetie... :)
Thank you for your continued support my sweetie... :)
Re: BJ...
27th Oct 2014 10:25pm
BJ
A title that can not be passed. I like how this poem almost had a feel that it was your hardened tempered rod was talking. Wait that sounds weird, anyway you get the jist. Lol
A title that can not be passed. I like how this poem almost had a feel that it was your hardened tempered rod was talking. Wait that sounds weird, anyway you get the jist. Lol
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re: Re: BJ...
28th Oct 2014 1:58am
Re: BJ...
28th Oct 2014 00:12am
re: Re: BJ...
28th Oct 2014 2:16am
Yup yup! it does indeed! lol but truly, thanks for the smile n support always :)
Re: BJ...
28th Oct 2014 3:17am
re: Re: BJ...
28th Oct 2014 3:29am
Lol if u did? I'd be highly honored! lol thank u my sweet lady, much appreciated :)
Re: BJ...
28th Oct 2014 7:42am
well i'm giggling like a school girl over here. this is soooo naughty in the best possible way.
gawd damn and yay for blow joys!
gawd damn and yay for blow joys!
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re: Re: BJ...
28th Oct 2014 10:57am
Lol well I'm super happy to give you joy
back! lol thank u Mami, Papi is smiling hugely! lol
back! lol thank u Mami, Papi is smiling hugely! lol
Re: BJ...
28th Oct 2014 12:27pm
re: Re: BJ...
28th Oct 2014 1:44pm
Lmao! Wow hey if you'd like a 'practice partner' I'm
happy to assist lol... Seriously though, I truly appreciate
your time n thoughts on my ink... :)
happy to assist lol... Seriously though, I truly appreciate
your time n thoughts on my ink... :)
re: re: Re: BJ...
28th Oct 2014 7:50pm
Ahha (insert HUGE giggle)
A "practice partner"
to please and enjoy
Now that is a juicy-thought
Which if i may
take a moment to say
Is a little erotic turn on!
Poetikmind your words inspire me! Thank you for doing what you do so well!
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re: re: re: Re: BJ...
29th Oct 2014 4:46am
Aaaawwww well I'm again, thankful n very flattered! :)
Honored n happy to inspire as well :)
Honored n happy to inspire as well :)
Re: BJ...
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Oct 2014 2:01pm
29th Oct 2014 2:00pm
Mmmmmmm! I will free just as soon you get here.....LOL!!! enjoyed this sexy write......the visual was....um......delightful.. Xo :)

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re: Re: BJ...
29th Oct 2014 4:04pm
Oh my how generous of u! I'll
be over in a min. Lol... Thank u flower, u rock! :)
be over in a min. Lol... Thank u flower, u rock! :)
Re: BJ...
29th Oct 2014 4:30pm
re: Re: BJ...
29th Oct 2014 5:32pm
Aaawww sweetie... You're so wonderful!
Thanks a ton I'm happy you liked m appreciate you much ,
appreciate you too... :)
Thanks a ton I'm happy you liked m appreciate you much ,
appreciate you too... :)
Re: BJ...
18th Nov 2014 2:30am
Great imagery...a delightful experience aptly described in your poem. Hot!
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re: Re: BJ...
18th Nov 2014 5:12am
Re: BJ...
22nd Nov 2014 4:07am
You meet me on the corner where I usually hang out...my place or yours?
Well written
Really Like
:)
Well written
Really Like
:)
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re: Re: BJ...
22nd Nov 2014 4:14am
Lmao, hell yea I will! lol thank you sweetheart
I truly appreciate your reading n support :)
I truly appreciate your reading n support :)
Re: BJ...
11th Dec 2014 5:22pm