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Wet
I know that you have no doubt
As to the effect you have on me
Just knowing I am your special lil pet
Keeps me soaking wet
This is not just an occasional thing
Lord knows it cannot be normal
But since our first lil flirtation
It's been running down my legs
If we could bottle up what you do to me
Babydoll we would make a fortune
I'd be the envy of every woman
KY would definitely go out of business
As to the effect you have on me
Just knowing I am your special lil pet
Keeps me soaking wet
This is not just an occasional thing
Lord knows it cannot be normal
But since our first lil flirtation
It's been running down my legs
If we could bottle up what you do to me
Babydoll we would make a fortune
I'd be the envy of every woman
KY would definitely go out of business
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Re: Wet
Anonymous
24th Oct 2014 7:53pm
Belle,
That's quite the Hot lil secret you have going on....and who needs to be normal! LOL!!! Enjoy your riches ; )
tornado
That's quite the Hot lil secret you have going on....and who needs to be normal! LOL!!! Enjoy your riches ; )
tornado
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re: Re: Wet
24th Oct 2014 8:00pm
Oh Mr Tornado i can honestly say that i think he and i both r
Glad u liked my lil write hun
Glad u liked my lil write hun
Re: Wet
24th Oct 2014 8:03pm
Intense word power :) To be in a constant state of ecstacy is a wonderful thing :)
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24th Oct 2014 8:10pm
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1st Nov 2014 9:03pm
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25th Oct 2014 4:38am
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25th Oct 2014 12:30pm
This is great, but begs for a more powerful ending. KY would go out of business, yet the prose needs something that rocks the last line.
Just a thought more an admirer.
Just a thought more an admirer.
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re: Re: Wet
1st Nov 2014 9:07pm
Thanks for your input darlin
That line was purposefully left showing my playful side hun
That line was purposefully left showing my playful side hun
Re: Wet
25th Oct 2014 4:29pm
Fountain of juice
The tap of life
This poem makes me happy, almost as happy as you
The tap of life
This poem makes me happy, almost as happy as you
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1st Nov 2014 9:08pm
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25th Oct 2014 10:40pm
it's a chemical thing, when two lovers excite each other beyond limits. exlosive write, Belle...
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1st Nov 2014 9:10pm
Isnt chemistry a wonderful thing?
Some attractions you just cannot deny
Some attractions you just cannot deny