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Better
She smiles with all she has left,
Yet tears are left un-dried.
And though she's got so much to say,
She bottles it up inside.
She's afraid to get to close,
Because of all the times she has been hurt.
Everyone saying they care,
Then they leave her alone in the dirt.
She tries the best she can,
To keep herself together.
With people so cruel,
It's hard to feel better.
Yet tears are left un-dried.
And though she's got so much to say,
She bottles it up inside.
She's afraid to get to close,
Because of all the times she has been hurt.
Everyone saying they care,
Then they leave her alone in the dirt.
She tries the best she can,
To keep herself together.
With people so cruel,
It's hard to feel better.
Published 19th Apr 2011
| Edited 13th May 2011
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19th Apr 2011 8:50pm
23rd Apr 2011 7:33am
Well the girl in the poem is me. I didn't know how else to get my thoghts out.
26th Apr 2011 6:12am
This poem reminds me of somebody i know that wont talk to me i think its cause she is to afraid to open up
26th Apr 2011 6:02pm
11th Jul 2011 6:51am
*dries your tears* *picks you up, dusts you off* Now, we're off to cuddle and watch South Park :3
