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If I know not thee
Allow me to fade happily
Into the seams of obscurity
Beyond the mountains there
And join the morning air
For if I know not thee,
Then too do I not see
and renders me of no worth,
And need not to stay on Earth.
For without living reason
To remain in our own season
May I leave painted
Into the landscape untainted.
A little background:
Before writing this,
I tried my best to help a friend.
A dear friend of mine..
And her words as a rebuttal to me were
"You don't know me."
Into the seams of obscurity
Beyond the mountains there
And join the morning air
For if I know not thee,
Then too do I not see
and renders me of no worth,
And need not to stay on Earth.
For without living reason
To remain in our own season
May I leave painted
Into the landscape untainted.
A little background:
Before writing this,
I tried my best to help a friend.
A dear friend of mine..
And her words as a rebuttal to me were
"You don't know me."
Published 20th Oct 2014
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20th Oct 2014 2:09pm
21st Oct 2014 9:54pm
If the help is not appreciated then your hands are tied. Leave them to their own self destruction. Enjoyed.
22nd Jan 2016 8:06pm
So much punctuation it drowns out your intended pause & quotations. "Less is more" No need for that with a shortened format. Some consideration went in to these phrases. Allow a general audience to endure the thoughts. Keep Grindin CAOS737
