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1:51am drowning out of water
my ship was anchored.
so firmly.
not even the captain could cast it out.
then you came along.
with a compass leading to my deepest desires.
taking me to all the places I've never been.
but there was a new voyage calling your name.
you abandoned ship.
leaving me in the middle of the ocean.
no compass....
casted out.
lost.
broken.
drowning in my own chaos.
my ship was anchored.
so firmly.
not even the captain could cast it out.
then you came along.
with a compass leading to my deepest desires.
taking me to all the places I've never been.
but there was a new voyage calling your name.
you abandoned ship.
leaving me in the middle of the ocean.
no compass....
casted out.
lost.
broken.
drowning in my own chaos.
Published 19th Oct 2014
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22nd Nov 2014 4:15pm
"leaving me in the middle of the ocean" - that's the way I feel too. When a sailor in treading water after his ship goes down, he's tempted to swallow some sea water. But the more he drinks, the thirstier he becomes. Til he goes mad. With me, the more semen I swallow, the more i crave, becoming thirstier and thirstier - til I am insane with NEED! Need for SEED! I'm a lost soul, like a seaman lost at sea. But in my case its a sea of semen, SEMEN! (I love what a Black man has, his goodness, his greatness, the wonder of his nakedness!)
22nd Nov 2014 4:19pm
Adding to what i already have confessed, I want that strength, that energy, that mountain of love that turns into a fountain of passion and satisfaction. Penis gives meaning to life. Orgasm makes life worth living!
21st Dec 2014 4:12pm
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