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Moonlight
The moonlight spills through my window
it pools on my pillow
it saturates my sheets.
Wait
it's not light
it's raindrops
...
God
I'm fucked.
it pools on my pillow
it saturates my sheets.
Wait
it's not light
it's raindrops
...
God
I'm fucked.
Published 4th Nov 2009
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5th Nov 2009 2:55am
takes me back to being a kid... i need not say more lol... simplicity at it's best
6th Nov 2009 5:34pm
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16th Nov 2009 2:44am
love this,
though it does not take me back to my childhood, definitely not
it takes me to new findings and a higher elevation.
however you take it is how you're supposed to; good write.
though it does not take me back to my childhood, definitely not
it takes me to new findings and a higher elevation.
however you take it is how you're supposed to; good write.
8th Dec 2009 11:34am
9th Dec 2009 4:32pm
This is genious! Nothing less than perfection!
I have found my favorite poem so far.
I have found my favorite poem so far.
11th Dec 2009 2:18am
Really!!
Thanks a million, it means alot to know that people enjoy what I write.
I came up with this at work, my mate gave me the first line and I came up with the rest whilst peddling Ham
Thanks a million, it means alot to know that people enjoy what I write.
I came up with this at work, my mate gave me the first line and I came up with the rest whilst peddling Ham
11th Dec 2009 3:38am
Amusing, profound, succinct: my favorite combination. And if you can do this while peddling ham... :O
Q: You know what I'd love to see?
A: A poem by you titled: "whilst peddling Ham"
Q: You know what I'd love to see?
A: A poem by you titled: "whilst peddling Ham"
1st Jun 2012 1:30am
